Sunday, 9 October 2011

Flow

This week's OSI prompt is river:




Portibal (c)


A stone on the bottom
Grows smaller as water flows by
Eventually all will be one.
at 13:46

9 comments:

  1. Thanks for the bigger picture of life. Love this post.

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  3. Beautiful. Kind of like life. Wonderful picture.

    Melanie

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  5. Lovely! Beautiful picture, too!!!

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  6. Beautiful acrostic. This poem is complete and wonderful

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  7. I guess it is the smaller picture of life...:)

    Short beautiful thoughts!

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  8. Amity,
    A clever way of combining the haiku to an acrostic.

    Hank

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  9. i love the idea of eventually everything drifts into a smallness that meets in the middle...

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